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Offline Scott S

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composition
« on: March 09, 2016, 12:10:12 PM »
do you guys like this?


Offline Ochotona

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Re: composition
« Reply #1 on: March 09, 2016, 12:33:51 PM »
I don't dislike it, but I think it might look better if there was more space on the right in the direction he's looking.  Just scrolling down right now I think I like it with some of the top cropped off too so there isn't so much red hat drawing my eye, I like it cropped near the bottom of the A on his hat.

Offline Scott S

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Re: composition
« Reply #2 on: March 09, 2016, 12:41:27 PM »
more like this?


Offline Ochotona

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Re: composition
« Reply #3 on: March 09, 2016, 12:43:51 PM »
Yup.  I'd still like more on the right, but maybe that's the edge of your shot where you've got it cropped.

Offline Scott S

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Re: composition
« Reply #4 on: March 09, 2016, 12:52:02 PM »
yeah, the first one is as shot, but cropped top and bottom to 8x10. I also didn't like so much above and below.
this is the one area where it's just so subjective. sometimes the crop makes or breaks a shot.